tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-107967316338974004.post5848229277597717695..comments2022-11-06T05:55:59.057-08:00Comments on Strawberry Hanky: BLOODFRUIT First 250 words and Query SummarySueJayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14428582843087294011noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-107967316338974004.post-18604179201063058452012-05-08T18:25:19.606-07:002012-05-08T18:25:19.606-07:00Bounty hunters! So cool! Best of luck! : )Bounty hunters! So cool! Best of luck! : )Write Lifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11243460609179141414noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-107967316338974004.post-6252887455375041672012-05-08T16:03:21.657-07:002012-05-08T16:03:21.657-07:00Thanks for all the love guys. I've spent the l...Thanks for all the love guys. I've spent the last three days packing and flying to Santiago, so now I have to catch up on what I've missed!SueJayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14428582843087294011noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-107967316338974004.post-5209670575654458792012-05-07T12:44:54.325-07:002012-05-07T12:44:54.325-07:00I really like your premise! I'm not very famil...I really like your premise! I'm not very familiar with the mythology, which really makes me want to read more. Good luck!<br /><br />Brandi #199Brandi M. Lynchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08648502344247439901noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-107967316338974004.post-23691066089836191412012-05-07T10:04:46.720-07:002012-05-07T10:04:46.720-07:00I love Sumerian mythology.
Best of luck!
Carolyn, ...I love Sumerian mythology.<br />Best of luck!<br />Carolyn, #157Carolyn Abiadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10567399129586443513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-107967316338974004.post-10894029747314218392012-05-06T19:04:22.802-07:002012-05-06T19:04:22.802-07:00Thanks, Jess. I'm a sucker for Shakespeare :)Thanks, Jess. I'm a sucker for Shakespeare :)SueJayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14428582843087294011noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-107967316338974004.post-71448736308618921382012-05-06T18:30:47.124-07:002012-05-06T18:30:47.124-07:00An interesting concept.
Good luck!
Tina (#194)An interesting concept.<br /><br />Good luck!<br /><br />Tina (#194)TYHatchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00654651712633828288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-107967316338974004.post-22827929333937050652012-05-06T17:47:21.232-07:002012-05-06T17:47:21.232-07:00Good luck!Good luck!Nicole Zoltackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07464800543376449290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-107967316338974004.post-40947035831255925562012-05-06T17:18:57.042-07:002012-05-06T17:18:57.042-07:00Thanks. In truth I did it because I'm still ve...Thanks. In truth I did it because I'm still very new at the querrying thing, and I felt it would be a stronger lead. Although just reading through everyone else's entries has shown me some really great querries.SueJayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14428582843087294011noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-107967316338974004.post-61492502317600311992012-05-06T17:16:31.450-07:002012-05-06T17:16:31.450-07:00I'm impressed that you put your first 250 befo...I'm impressed that you put your first 250 before your query. They are so compelling they could be the query. Very good. Very, very good. A definate winner IMHO (now, before your get your hopes up I have to warn you that my wife thinks my middle name is OftenWrong, I hate to admit that hers is Oftenright...<br /><br />Good luck!C.G.Aylinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09612362478635598996noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-107967316338974004.post-22765417282501113002012-05-06T16:24:54.813-07:002012-05-06T16:24:54.813-07:00I must say I really love your title!! Good luck!!
...I must say I really love your title!! Good luck!!<br /><br />Entry #31Jamie Corriganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11837319723353425561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-107967316338974004.post-70709815661540546542012-05-05T18:28:12.764-07:002012-05-05T18:28:12.764-07:00Wow, this sounds dark and intriguing~ everything a...Wow, this sounds dark and intriguing~ everything an urban fantasy should be :) And, I must add, I love the title (both of your manuscript and of your blog!).Jesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14121018905141253640noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-107967316338974004.post-68681964860752405942012-05-05T17:23:22.863-07:002012-05-05T17:23:22.863-07:00Interesting concept and setting! Best of luck! :)Interesting concept and setting! Best of luck! :)Precy Larkinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16714824672731935371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-107967316338974004.post-72669200559957221652012-05-05T15:02:06.207-07:002012-05-05T15:02:06.207-07:00Hi Sue,
This is Kevin by the way. I have heard lo...Hi Sue,<br />This is Kevin by the way. I have heard lots about your book but this is first I have been able to read any of it. Great job in hooking the reader. I really want to find out what happens. You've created an intriguing setting and characters that I am interested in. I'm sure everyone else feels the same. I look forward to being able to read more. Best of luck! <br />-KevinEmilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09877102294217452140noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-107967316338974004.post-15899487349762900762012-05-05T13:41:47.086-07:002012-05-05T13:41:47.086-07:00You too! I love your new query, and I was glad to ...You too! I love your new query, and I was glad to finally get to read some of your book.SueJayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14428582843087294011noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-107967316338974004.post-86720261709336936462012-05-05T12:57:37.168-07:002012-05-05T12:57:37.168-07:00Very intriguing! Good luck!Very intriguing! Good luck!Mariekehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16383960692054256957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-107967316338974004.post-3358816309239374952012-05-05T10:46:08.147-07:002012-05-05T10:46:08.147-07:00I would so read this! :) Good luck!I would <i>so</i> read this! :) Good luck!Carrie Butlerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01540590799406170410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-107967316338974004.post-29613185748544624072012-05-04T18:40:49.848-07:002012-05-04T18:40:49.848-07:00Stopping by to wish you luck in the contest. I als...Stopping by to wish you luck in the contest. I also love your opening line! Such a great hook!Kimberly Gabrielhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05588782441929008886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-107967316338974004.post-55888012613880363892012-05-04T18:15:26.034-07:002012-05-04T18:15:26.034-07:00What a great opening line!
Best of luck to youWhat a great opening line! <br />Best of luck to youRobyn Lucashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07589972339101157288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-107967316338974004.post-75026338497802121712012-05-04T17:59:04.503-07:002012-05-04T17:59:04.503-07:00Good luck! Glad you made it in!Good luck! Glad you made it in!April Wallhttp://aewelch.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-107967316338974004.post-17948730753497869932012-05-04T14:07:53.365-07:002012-05-04T14:07:53.365-07:00Thanks Adam. It's nice to see someone familiar...Thanks Adam. It's nice to see someone familiar with the mythology. Most the time when I tell people about it they just give me a puzzled look :)SueJayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14428582843087294011noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-107967316338974004.post-8593216292268855482012-05-04T13:58:50.354-07:002012-05-04T13:58:50.354-07:00Love the choice of Sumerian mythology, not somethi...Love the choice of Sumerian mythology, not something you see very often. And it's already apparent through the few pages here that you aren't hiding behind the mythology, but using it as a backdrop to a very compelling love story.<br />Once again, good luck!Adam Osterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13890892064225079261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-107967316338974004.post-49404295770164759532012-05-04T07:13:25.099-07:002012-05-04T07:13:25.099-07:00Congratulations on making the list, best of luck w...Congratulations on making the list, best of luck with your fantastic entry ^_^Loralie Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07134452749240292803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-107967316338974004.post-33901885063045187362012-05-03T19:52:02.239-07:002012-05-03T19:52:02.239-07:00I love this world you've created. Rooting for...I love this world you've created. Rooting for you!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11607291218714097810noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-107967316338974004.post-152886548989464902012-05-03T17:25:16.669-07:002012-05-03T17:25:16.669-07:00Best of luck from TWV #30!Best of luck from TWV #30!Alaskan Ninjahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15302796847867918294noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-107967316338974004.post-56981002981460403002012-05-03T15:24:58.337-07:002012-05-03T15:24:58.337-07:00Fantastic! Stopped by to say good luck!Fantastic! Stopped by to say good luck!Jennie Baileyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02088195986628533511noreply@blogger.com